student-茉莉

====After visiting the Yin Yu Tang traditional Chinese house in the Peabody Essex Museum, we got to actually see the house with our own eyes rather than just reading about it. The Yin Yu Tang house has two floors and a courtyard that includes two small ponds with fish. The ancient Chinese were very superstitious about the way their houses were built, and some still are today. The house has an open roof to allow rain water to flow in. They believed that because the rain symbolized wealth and prosperity, the open roof would bring their family money. There are many bedrooms in the house. Many people lived in a single traditional Chinese house. The area of the house that someones room was located in depended on their status within the family. While in the house, I noticed that the shoes were tiny, some even smaller than a toddlers foot. This is because they used to bind a young girl's feet together to make them smaller. They thought small feet were beautiful even though feet binding would break the bones and cause pain. This field trip showed not only the architecture of a traditional Chinese house, but also the culture and daily life of the ancient Chinese.==== = =



茉莉,

你的廣告很簡單, 不錯, 但是如果可以稍微提供多一點的資料, 可以吸引比較多人的興趣.

葉老師 1/23/2011

我心目中理想的居家環境

我心目中理想的家在美洲. 我喜歡美洲因為我的母語是英文. 美國也有各式各樣的環境. 我心目中理想的家在城市裡. 如果住在城市裡會非常方便. 不須要開車就可以到很多地方. 我希望可以住在公寓裡. 住在公寓裡，不需要割草. 我會考慮中國的風水. 但是我只會考慮實際有用的風水. 我會運用中國的風水來 選擇房子的地點. 我想我的生活重心會在臥房. 因為我花很多時間在臥房裡作功課. 我也在臥房裡睡覺. 我想要我的家簡單樸素. 不要很多花俏的裝飾. 這就是我心目中理想的家.

茉莉, 從你的作文裡, 我可以看到你未來的家很清爽, 好棒! 葉老師 1/17/2011

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哇! 茉莉, 你的家好清爽, 後面還有一片小菜園, 真好!

葉老師 11/6/2010

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茉莉, 很好,你挑了好幾個具有代表性的中國建築, 但是如果你可以稍微加一點自己的說明會更好

葉老師11/6/2010

**__ 我想有一 輛車 __**

我想有一 輛車 一輛不需要華麗的車 在我睡過頭的時候 我可以自己開到學校 我想有一 輛車 一輛不需要太大的車 在我很無聊的時候 我可以自己開到朋友家

茉莉, 你表達得很清楚 當你真的需要一輛車 你不會在意它是否華麗好看 我很同意你的說法

葉老師